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Name: Dokuhebimaru
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Status: Author
Join Date: 12/19/09
Last Logged In: 02/22/10
Skin: Pink
Contact: GlassKai GenericGenocide Dokuhebimaru
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Status: Open
About my services:
Will not read: I will never read slash, mpreg, or incest. I don't mind lemons; in fact, I prefer them over anything else (yes I'm a pervert, deal with it; it's not my fault that my love life is nonexistent). I give you fair warning that if your lemon says anything about the guy breaking through the girl's virginity/barrier/whatever, rewrite that part now. In real human anatomy the "barrier" or hymen isn't something that can be broken through. It's merely a flap of skin on the outside of the vaginal opening. There can still be discomfort and pain depending on the circumstances (virgins will still be relatively inflexible down there, if the guy is above average, etc).
Rape is also an iffy subject for me. It is a crime for a reason people, so the victim should not enjoy it...really. My best friend was raped by multiple people at a party, and she shared all of the gruesome details with me so I know that rape isn't something that the victim normally enjoys (unless they're sick in the head or a complete and utter masochist...well even then...).
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