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Name: Hara3
Alias: Isao Hara
Status: Member
Join Date: 07/14/11
Last Logged In: 04/29/13
Skin: Shinigami_HPB
sorry guys i homestuck'd
although i really didn't get shit up
i most likely never will
so i apologize
therefore this illustration is indicative of my intentions
its all so simple
nope
can't do it bro
consider the reason i joined was a sole author
(probably only one i really cared about)
thats not to say i dont enjoy anyone elses work
i will try to review from time to time i guess
yes i know im being lazy with the syntax
dont really care much for that
because honestly
who is going to come and read this
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Will check for: - Spelling
- Punctuation
- Characterization
- Plot
- Overall Impression
Status: Open
About my services: I will tell you what I feel is "wrong" about the story, though it may not necessarily be in your eyes. Expect constructive criticism, but not in a hurtful way. I know some authors can be a little sensitive about criticism, but just know I'm not attacking you. Particularly important to me - Flow of story: If things are going too fast (or slow, I suppose). Character development: Unless you know, it is smut or a one-shot or intended to be short. Spelling: Very important. I can spot mistakes very easily. It's embarrassing if you use the wrong word too. Note that I am not a perfect human being and I will probably make a few screw-ups in beta-reading/my own stories, but I will gladly help point out anything that might need changing. Bear with me. Much love.
Will not read:
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